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September 07, 2005

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Stephanie Gunter

I really think that your title is really good, a short catch phrase is a sure eye catcher. Your first paragraph however, should give more background on your essay topic, you should explain what the early New Netherland, the Ottowa Society and the Siux are and why its important that they are both the same and different.

Stephanie Gunter

really think that your title is really good, a short catch phrase is a sure eye catcher. Your first paragraph however, should give more background on your essay topic, you should explain what the early New Netherland, the Ottowa Society and the Siux were. why its important that they are both the same and different.

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