I Hope This Works...

Here, hopefully, should be my Civil War photo album.

Comments

[Stephanie Gunter]

Audrey,
Your photo Album was very informative, I learned alot about the role of surgeons in the Civil War. I however, would like to make you aware of some things that might enhance your album. For one, you should proof read your paper more. In your title you mispelled the word MEDICINE. Second, although the pictures were very nice, I think that you should have linked them more to the captions. You had a picture depicting the subject of the caption, but nothing in the captions refered back to the pictures.
Finally, your thesis confused me a little. I thought you were going to talk about the surgeons and the surgeries of the civil war, but then you go and talk about the nurse Corp. You should stick to the subject of your thesis. Other then that I really liked your album and Im looking forward in viewing your next album